offload: update analytics page#24089
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Signed-off-by: Craig Osterhout <craig.osterhout@docker.com>
Signed-off-by: Craig Osterhout <craig.osterhout@docker.com>
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Documentation Review Summary
I've reviewed the updated analytics page documentation. The content is clear and informative overall. I found a few minor style improvements that would make the writing more direct and concise.
These are suggestions for improving the style - not critical issues that block the PR.
Signed-off-by: Craig Osterhout <craig.osterhout@docker.com>
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Documentation Review Summary
I've reviewed the changes to the Offload usage documentation. The content is generally clear and helpful, but I found a few areas where the style could be improved according to our documentation standards:
Key findings:
- Several lines exceed recommended length limits
- Some redundant phrasing that could be more direct
- Minor scope expansion from the original section
Most of these are style improvements rather than critical issues. The documentation accurately describes the new Offload activity page features.
Signed-off-by: Craig Osterhout <craig.osterhout@docker.com>
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LGTM. |
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Will carry this into the wider GA updates. |
<!--Delete sections as needed --> ## Description Updates for upcoming Offload release. Preview: - https://deploy-preview-24487--docsdocker.netlify.app/offload/ - https://deploy-preview-24487--docsdocker.netlify.app/desktop/setup/vm-vdi/#use-docker-offload ## Related issues or tickets ENGDOCS-3216 DCL-1433 #24089 ## Reviews <!-- Notes for reviewers here --> <!-- List applicable reviews (optionally @tag reviewers) --> - [ ] Technical review - [ ] Editorial review - [ ] Product review Signed-off-by: Craig Osterhout <craig.osterhout@docker.com>
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Description
Updated usage topic with new analytics page.
https://deploy-preview-24089--docsdocker.netlify.app/offload/usage/#monitor-your-usage
Related issues or tickets
DCL-1433
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