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Volunteers: Are you marking this coursework? You can find a guide on how to mark this coursework in HOW_TO_MARK.md in the root of this repository

Your Details

  • Your Name: Kerim Zamir
  • Your City: Birmingham
  • Your Slack Name: Kerim Zamir

Homework Details

  • Module: HTML/CSS
  • Week: 2

Notes

  • What did you find easy?
    Almost everything

  • What did you find hard?
    adding icons to the social media links

  • What do you still not understand?
    N/A

  • Any other notes?
    N/A

*added* images for new the extension task
*added* image for new the extension task
*added* aside
*added* aside css
*change* improved positions
*added* Store Page
*change* improved positioning
*added* Store CSS
Comment thread index.html
<div class="container">
<img class="bg-image" src="img/first-background.jpg" alt="bg-img">
<div class="bg-text">
<p class="p-1">Introducing Karma</p>

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This is a title and needs to be different from "Bring wifi ... " text. I highly suggest to use h1 or h2 , so users can have a better experience.

Comment thread index.html
</div>
<aside class="addition-1">
<div class="aside-1">
<p class="p-new"> Wherever I am, I just don´t worry about my connection anymore! </p>

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Firstly the goal was to create a paragraph in 3 lines, If I am going to be picky, I would say you need to fix it first. You can split your words in 3 divs in a column sort. Another Important thing for your whole HTML is naming your elements classes more specific and details , so when another person is reading your code, they can understand your code. For instance, class p-new can represent any p element in your HTML. Try something like, get-karma-text-above

Comment thread index.html
</head>
<body>
<header>
<nav>

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The height of nav section is a bit small in terms of UI. This won't help user's eyes to see the nav section easily. I would recommend it a bit bigger in height.

Comment thread index.html
<p class="p-new"> Wherever I am, I just don´t worry about my connection anymore! </p>
</div>
<div class="aside-2">
<a href="store.html" class="get-karma-today">Get Karma today</a>

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Also, making the button text bolder would make it much eaiser to read. Using font-weight

Comment thread store.html
<main>
<fieldset>
<h1 class="fieldset-h">Order your Karma wifi device today!</h1>
<form>

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Positioning your form elements and making them align and making them bigger are needed. So they would match the given design. Play with margin, padding and height and width in em, rem format to make them like the design.

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