I reviewed the PDF version which is what the user will eventually see. The Only minor concern is the usual problem with these: the resolution of the images. There is not much control we have other than not including as much in the image. In that vein most, if not all could be significantly cropped to make the fonts more legible.

That said, it is good enough and given the very significant changes to the perspective, it is probably important to get it this tutorial out for the release. Resolution issues affect many of the tutorials and can be a future work